Searching for someone to "proof read" my tunes

Since im so new to this, and my truck is far from stock, I'm wondering if someone here can just give my tune a once over and tell me if I'm headed in the right direction or not. Not asking for the answers, just asking if I'm approaching this the right way or if I'm headed for disaster. As of right now whatever I wrote will
not make fuel rail pressure and the truck dies. And like I said. I hope I am going in a positive direction with it because I have no idea which way is up anymore. Went as far as paying for the class with Higher Performance academy, and not that I was disappointed, I just felt like for my application, things did not get answered.
So whoever is reading this. If you can just take a look and tell me how I'm doing, I would really really appreciate it.